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Twisted Fate

Twisted Fate
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(Wrote this a while back; just wanted to share it)

I walked up to her introduced myself; I was dying inside though (tend to be shy at times) but I had to be bold because my guys were around.  I needed to step up to her because I felt a genuine attraction.  The first time I saw her there was something different in the air, I could not help myself but to stare.  I couldn’t help but fall into her presence, ready to dive into the very depths of her.  It was not what she was wearing or the smile she tried to hide; it went deeper than that; it came from the inside.  I’m so serious mah (she hates that) when I first saw you, took my breath away, leaving me not only breathless, but speechless, clueless, thoughtless (and that’s hard for a smart ass like me). Every inch of my existence wanted to embrace you; I wanted to get closer to you and dig into your being.  I was curious to know everything about you; I wanted to invest time in you. 

There were a lot of people out there that afternoon but deep within I wished it was just the two of us.  Your friend was around and I didn’t feel too comfortable until she left us both at the table.  You were moving your hips to the beautiful sound of the band that was playing; I could tell you were happy to be there.  Your angel like innocence, masked under your edgy, hardcore exterior,
sparks a fire deep down inside me, setting ablaze a passion so undeniable.  I could not resist her, I was compelled to journey the depths of this visual oasis. 

She is highly intelligent, well educated, great skin (dark skin and smooth like silk), beautiful face, gorgeous body (hourglass shape), great smile, she’s sophisticated and reserved, a bit conservative and based on our initial conversation, she’s a realist.  Just the kind I like.  Her elegance and inner peacefulness keeps me at ease.  From the look in her eyes I see the passion of a soul in need of release that needs to be nurtured, to be touched, to be loved.

I wanted her.  From the many conversations we had, I grew to need her to be with me.  I know that I didn’t want to disappoint her or hurt her.  I wanted her to be my home.

But

I never had a chance…

A twisted a fate forbade me from being with her…

sdemn

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  • kattadakitten
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    Wow!

  • DaDa
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    :-( i need details!!! why?!!

    • Mr. Prodg
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      Why what? Lol

    • DaDa
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      what was the twisted fate that forbade u?!

    • Mr. Prodg
      on

      Lol. Good question.

  • Alexandra D
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    Wow..that was really good and detailed..wonder if it’ true or not? Didn’t know you had that in you

    • Mr. Prodg
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      Lol. What exactly u didn’t know I had in me?

    • Alexandra D
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      The very descriptive, powerful ,exciting writing. I thoght you were just a blog writer

    • Mr. Prodg
      on

      I’m a writer when I need 2b…thanks 4 checking this piece out

  • Shawn DaCeo
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    I was feeling the same way about a chick I met at the club cuzzoe; too bad it was a “right now” type of thing

    • Mr. Prodg
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      Lol @ right now thing

  • kattadakitten
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    Twisted Fate? Expound! :-)

    • Mr. Prodg
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      Twisted fate bc there r quite a few things that we couldn’t overcome and so we just couldn’t move on to the next step

  • Maguie
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    Or Twisted fate because you just realize it later? :)

    • Mr. Prodg
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      realize what later?

  • kattadakitten
    on

    Hmmph!

    Do you believe, humans can overcome just about anything once they truly want or desire something as forbidingly amazing as described in this piece?

    • Mr. Prodg
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      I’m not sure Katt. Some things are hard 2 get especially when the boundaries have been set

  • kattadakitten
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    I see!

    From a woman’s stand, this a beautiful piece. The sort that tickles and makes you wish that you were the subject being written about…(pardon my run-on)

    2 finger snaps for you! :-)

  • Haitian Queen
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    Wow, very deep. Reading those words i can see you really wanted to be with this person. It is amazing to just see someone and all those thoughts are in your mind.

  • Haitian Queen
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    It is sad that it could not go further than your words.

    • Mr. Prodg
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      Very unfortunate

  • SM
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    This is such a raw, passionate piece. Nothing superfluous is said and everything resonates with the reader as if you’ve written it for us each individually. Makes me think a woman could get carried away being loved by you I’m sure the subject appreciated thyis piece. It’s unfortunate though that sometimes some things just weren’t meant to be.

    • Mr. Prodg
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      yes indeed.

  • Jamie Dedes
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    Nice work. And, certainly, the dream of what could be might be better than what would have been.

    The exchange of comments here was almost as engaging as the story.

    • Mr. Prodg
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      Thanks for checking in Jamie. I definitely enjoyed your spot. I have added you to my blogroll, i will check out your spot again. Thanks.

  • jamie
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    What was the twisted fate…why couldn’t you guys be together? How did the woman feel? Lol…I want thesequestions answered

  • Eksqwizit
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    I am seeing a pattern.
    Thanks for sharing

  • genesis
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    Was it really Twisted Fate or Bad Timing. It’s was amazing the descriptive nature of this piece ..it was like your eyes where the lining of dress and you swayed to her beat with you heart love this

  • Kitten
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    IS there such thing as bad timins? I’ve always beliebed that time is a tehrory therefore if you create it, you will always FIND IT! Hmmphhh~

    • Mr. Prodg
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      It’s like going to a lady house in the middle of the night expecting to get some coochie but because she’s on her period ur ass is out of luck…so yes, thats bad freaking timing…lol…

    • SM
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      I agree with Kitten. If this guy wants a chance then he needs to take whichever one presents himself or make his own chance and see what comes of it. That’s the only way to know if it’s fate or just simply not meant to be.

    • Mr. Prodg
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      SM
      how do you suggest he does that?

    • SM
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      Now Mr. Prodg, if a man REALLY wants something he tries to think of the best way to surprise and show the woman of his desire that he means business. Think outside the box. Leap against the ostacles. Did he try to court this woman? There’s a reason girls like romantic comedies lol.
      Each woman is different; for one it could be flowers, for another it could be showing up on her doorstep, for someone else it could be some other gesture. It depends on what this woman is like and what she likes and what he is willing to do to get a chance with her. Now if she doesn’t respond to that passionate effort, you’ll know it’s for the best and can rest assured you did all that could be done.

    • Mr. Prodg
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      i definitely understand that but sometimes it is easier said

  • Kitten
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    If it’s just coochie that you want, then perhaps you are out of luck but not bad timing per se, since there are other holes in the body and other part of the human anatomy which can be used to produce the same outcome. Some folks don’t mind having it in the shower while she is menstruating. :-)

    • Mr. Prodg
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      nasty :(

  • Kitten
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    Whatever rocks people’s boat! It’s not my place to label them as nasty or anything lse. Lmaooooo

  • Marie-Yves
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    It gets better with each post, everything make sense now. Thanks for the read!

    • Mr. Prodg
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      i would love to know what just clicked in your head? thanks for checking it out.

  • Marie-Yves
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    Nothing important, just that from the first read, you dismissed her, because of your ego, then you felt highly obliged to remain acquainted with her, and now you want a relationship or so it seems. You are a busy dude, or just plain stubborn! Like I stated before, life of player is never dull….

    • Mr. Prodg
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      why are these stories connected? What does a story have to do with a “player’s life”? Am i missing something here or should i let you and Maguie write my stories now?

  • Signifigant1
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    WoW! The way you describe this was moving…I felt like the women you were talking about ;) I am aspired…

  • Eksqwizit
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    Between maggie, significant, marie yves et al, dang this is really taking a life of its own!!! lol

    which one of these ladies was dumped for twisted fate?
    are they warning twisted fate to stay away?
    is twisted fate a real person or a fictional person?
    hmmm I would say real as Mrprodg has on multiple occasions replied to his feelings concerning this young woman when he was asked. Therefore some scorned ladies are warning twisted fate girl.
    What is she to do?
    will she go with her heart that wants to believe in her romantic blogger and give in the puss or will she go with the ladies warning her that he may be a player?
    What is a girl to do?

    wow! wow! wow!!! A suivre…this sure could be a great Hollywood movie…if I were twisted fate, I would hire a PI since I have a chauffeur I am rich and can afford to investigate my future lover lol. I am enjoying your blog MrProdg, thank you.

    Women never believe other women anyways. We all consider each other to be HATERS. lol

    • Mr. Prodg
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      which one of these ladies was dumped for twisted fate?

      - how could a made up story apply to them?

      are they warning twisted fate to stay away?

      - you cannot warn others about something that doesn’t apply to you

      is twisted fate a real person or a fictional person?

      - thats up to the reader

      As for the player comment, well, the reader who posted it must know something that i don’t or maybe she has noticed some parallels with her own life.

  • Eksqwizit
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    you have to pay the piper ProdG. You have asked for the readers to decide if THE STORY is fictitious or real THEREAFTER you have proceeded to reply to all questions pertinent to the main character’s feelings regarding this “twisted fate lady” in the first person. This, in turn supports that this is a “REAL” story. Now, here comes some broken hearted soul whom you probably hurt in the past or who wish to harm you, reading this beautifully written multiple part story about a woman whom you seem to “exalt her virtues” out comes the jealous monster who pushes these ladies to retaliate or warn twisted fate to not go that route so she too won’t be hurt by you…

    In any case, someone or a few might have been hurt here…the life of a blogger I guess! Bloggers create perceptions deserved or underserved…hmmmm

    when we play with people’s emotions or perceptions, yep that is a player wouldn’t you agree?

    always be ready for the consequences of our actions, ALWAYS…unfair or not, annoying or not and definitely if it is truthful…we have to own up!

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